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Post by whisper on Sept 1, 2005 20:06:56 GMT
Also add if it is OK that I post them on the guild webbie or not... Thanks...
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Post by fairyblue578 on Sept 6, 2005 21:50:22 GMT
Chapter 1-The Arrival. An owl swooped down to 6`th year Harry Potter and his friends Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. Hoping this would be his O.W.l.(ordinary, wizarding, levels)Results, Harry opened one of the 4 letters. "What does it say Harry?" Hermione asked. Harry read the letter out loud. "Dear Mr.Potter, Your cousin, Lila Potter is coming to Hogwarts this term. She will be arriving at #12 Grimmauld Place on the 30 `Th. of July, Best Wishes, Minervara McGonagall.
There was a pause. Then ... "You have a cousin?" Ron said in confusion, Hermione looked at her watch. "Yikes! The 30`th is today" She had barely finished saying that when downstairs , the doorbell of #12 Grimmuald place rung. "That?s her!" Exclaimed Harry jumping up. Then... "Filthy Mudbloods! Blood Traitors, befouling the Home of My ancestors!" Harry , Hermione, and Ron ran down the stairs where professor Lupin and Mr. Weasley, (Ron`s Dad) were tugging Moth- eaten curtains over a portrait of A screaming, ugly, old lady in a black nightcap and dress. Seeing Mr. Weasley helping Lupin pull the curtains over the old woman made Harry sad, Because he remembered his first night here, Sirus Black, his Godfather had been the one helping Lupin close curtains over his Mother. Now Sirus was dead, because his own cousin, A death- eater of Lord Voldemort, killed him. "Voldemort. Voldemort was the reason his own parents weren?t here helping Lupin. Voldemort, murdered both Sirus, and my parents." Thought Harry. Harry?s Scar prickled. It was this scar that made Harry so unusual. It was a souvenir from when he was only 1 year old. Lord Voldemort, had arrived at the Potter`s House one night and killed James Potter, while he was trying to protect Harry and Lily Potter. Then Voldemort had murdered Harry?s mother. Voldemort had then turned his wand on baby Harry. But the spell that hit him rebounded on Voldemort. But Voldemort did not die, as the spell was meant for, powerless, less alive than the weakest ghost, he fled. Leaving a lighting shaped scar on Harry?s forehead. Lupin answered the door. A small, thin 11 year old slipped through the door. Lila had long , straight jet black hair, and bright blue eyes. Mrs.Weasley came out of a door that led to the kitchen. "Hello, dear." She introduced herself to Lila. " I?m Mrs.Weasley, and this is my son Ron." She motioned toward Ron, who looked a lot like his mother, with his vivid red hair, and plenty of freckles." My husband Arthur, My sons Fred and George, My son Bill, this is Percy , this is Charlie, who have all left school, and this is Ginny." All of them had freckles and Red hair, including Ron`s one year younger sister Ginny. All the Weasleys waved. Mr. Weasley continued. " This is Hermione Granger," He waved a hand at Hermione , with brown bushy hair , and she waved at Lila, "Hi!" Mr.Weasley continued "This is your cousin, Harry Potter." Harry went foreword to shake hands with Lila. "Hi, Lila, Welcome to #12 Grimmuald place, Headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix."
Chapter 2- Lila And the Order of the Phoenix. " She has your jet black hair." Hermione whispered to Harry as Ginny lead Lila to the room she was sharing with Ginny and Hermione. She went of to go with Ginny and Lila. '' Meet you an Harry?s and my room." Ron called quietly after her. Ron and Harry started climbing the stairs to their room. "How could I have a cousin?" Harry asked Ron. Ron shrugged. They reached their room and found 3 envelopes addressed to Mr. Harry Potter , Bedroom, #12 Grimmuald Place, Ms. Hermione Granger, bedroom, #12 Grimmauld Place, and Mr.Ronald Weasley, bedroom, #12 Grimmauld Place. " Our O.W.l. results! I forgot!" Ron said. "Do you think Hermione remembered?" Harry asked Ron. He had just finished saying that, when the door flew open. " Our O.W.L Results! " Hermione shrieked. Harry handed her her letter. Ron grabbed his. Harry opened his letter. His letter began: Dear Mr. Potter, Your O.W.L.s scores are as followed: Defense Against The Dark Arts: Outstanding Potions: Outstanding Transfiguration: Exceeds Expectations Charms: Exceeds Expectations Herbology: Acceptable Care of Magical Creatures: Exceeds Expectations Divination: Dreadful Astronomy: Poor History of Magic: Dreadful Truly, Minervara McGonagall, Albus Dumbledore, and The Ministry of Magic. Ron, Harry and Hermione were all quiet. Then? "You lot! Supper!" Mrs. Weasley called down. Hermione hurried out of the room, with Ron and Harry at her tail. Lila was just coming down the stairs. "Lila, follow us, and be quiet please" Harry and Ron whispered to her. Lila crept quietly after her cousin. Ron went through the kitchen door, as Harry motioned for Lila to follow. He went in after her. Mrs. Weasley came bustling over. "Lila, dear, you can sit down. There?s no need to be quiet in here." Just as Mrs. Weasley said that, there was a screeching from behind the door in the hall. "Tonks" She muttered. Mr. Weasley ran out into the hall, followed by Lupin, letting in the sound. "Blood Traitors! Filthy Mudbloods! Crowding up the home of my Fathers!" Screamed Mrs. Black. Tonks came in, clearly exasperated. "I?m sorry Molly!" Tonks sighed. "It was that stupid-" "Trolls leg" Harry and Ron finished. For there was a troll?s leg umbrella stand in the hall. "It?s all right dear. Sit down and I?ll introduce you to Lila." Mrs. Weasley comforted Tonks. Tonks sat down. "Now. Tonks, this is Harry?s cousin Lila Potter. Lila, this is Tonks." Mrs. Weasley said. "Tonks is a metamorphingi. Which means she can change clothes or faces." Tonks said "Your here already? Well, I suppose you would be. Look at this." Tonks scrunched her nose up, concentrating, and all of a sudden instead of the long blond hair she had had a second ago, she had short tomato red hair. Lila blinked. Mr. Weasley and Lupin came in. "Dish us up some soup please Molly." Mr. Weasley said heartily. "Hello there, Lila. I?m Remus Lupin." Lupin introduced himself to Lila. " The former Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher at Hogwarts." Then Ginny asked "Who is the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher anyway?" The adults exchanged uncomfortable glances. Just then, Tonks dropped her soup bowl. Which may have had nothing to do with being clumsy. "Tonks!" Molly Weasley exclaimed, exasperated but clearly relieved. "Sorry" Tonks said in a small voice. Mr. Weasley waved his wand, and the spilled soup was immediately sopped up by some invisible source. " I have some desert in the kitchen when you?re ready, Lila. It?s tripe!" Mrs.Weasley told Lila, excited. "Mrs. Weasley?s tripe is the best, Lila! I highly recommend it!" Lupin said, shooting a teasing glance at Mrs.Weasley. "Enough of that, Remus" Mrs.Weasley said, waving her spoon threateningly. Ginny giggled, while Mr. Weasley and Hermione laughed and Fred, George, Harry, Ron and Lila all stifled loud fits of laughter. Mrs. Weasley served the tripe and Harry slurped it up contentedly. Lila tasted it tentatively, then complimented Mrs. Weasley gratefully, "This is great Mrs.Weasley!" Mrs. Weasley blushed, then asked, did you three get any post today?" She asked the trio. Hermione exclaimed "Our O.W.L.S!" With that, Mrs. Weasley sprang to life. "What did you get, Ron?" Ron muttered "8 OWLS. Total." "Oh Ron! How wonderful!" Mrs. Weasley celebrated. She was overjoyed at the prospect of young Ronnie being such a good student. Ron sent a desperate glance at the twins, but they just grinned impishly at him and said "Sorry bud, you?re on your on." Next he looked to Mr. Weasley for help, but Arthur was too busy ladling out some more soup for himself. Finally Lupin said "So, you lot, are you looking forward to the next year at Hogwarts?" "Oh yes! I?m in all N.E.W.T. classes!" Hermione said eagerly. "What do you plan to be?" Mr.Weasley asked. "Not sure yet. I like the sea?" Hermione was a little reluctant to reveal her plans, which in fact she was very sure of. ( It is okay if you want to post it on the webbie)
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Post by Derek on Sept 6, 2005 22:01:21 GMT
good job
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Post by whisper on Sept 7, 2005 0:16:57 GMT
Yes, well done indeed...
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Post by fairyblue578 on Sept 7, 2005 22:19:25 GMT
Thanks! here's the sister version, it's the same until towards the end: Chapter 1-The Arrival. An owl swooped down to 6`th year Harry Potter and his friends Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger. Hoping this would be his O.W.l.(ordinary wizarding levels)Results, Harry opened one of the 4 letters. "What does it say Harry?" Hermione asked. Harry read the letter out loud. "Dear Mr.Potter, Your sister, Lila Potter is coming to Hogwarts this term. She will be arriving at #12 Grimmauld Place on the 30 `Th. of July, Best Wishes, Minervara McGonagall.
There was a pause. Then ... "You have a sister?" Ron said in confusion, Hermione looked at her watch. "Yikes! The 30`th is today" She had barely finished saying that when downstairs , the doorbell of #12 Grimmuald place rung. "That?s her!" Exclaimed Harry jumping up. Then... "Filthy Mudbloods! Blood Traitors, befouling the Home of My ancestors!" Harry , Hermione, and Ron ran down the stairs where professor Lupin and Mr. Weasley, (Ron`s Dad) were tugging Moth- eaten curtains over a portrait of A screaming, ugly, old lady in a black nightcap and dress. Seeing Mr. Weasley helping Lupin pull the curtains over the old woman made Harry sad, Because he remembered his first night here, Sirus Black, his Godfather had been the one helping Lupin close curtains over his Mother. Now Sirus was dead, because his own cousin, A death- eater of Lord Voldemort, killed him. "Voldemort. Voldemort was the reason his own parents weren?t here helping Lupin. Voldemort, murdered both Sirus, and my parents." Thought Harry. Harry?s Scar prickled. It was this scar that made Harry so unusual. It was a souvenir from when he was only 1 year old. Lord Voldemort, had arrived at the Potter`s House one night and killed James Potter, while he was trying to protect Harry and Lily Potter. Then Voldemort had murdered Harry?s mother. Voldemort had then turned his wand on baby Harry. But the spell that hit him rebounded on Voldemort. But Voldemort did not die, as the spell was meant for, powerless, less alive than the weakest ghost, he fled. Leaving a lighting shaped scar on Harry?s forehead. Lupin answered the door. A small, thin 11 year old slipped through the door. Lila had long , straight jet black hair, and bright green eyes. Mrs.Weasley came out of a door that led to the kitchen. "Hello, dear." She introduced herself to Lila. " I?m Mrs.Weasley, and this is my son Ron." She motioned toward Ron, who looked a lot like his mother, with his vivid red hair, and plenty of freckles." My husband Arthur, My sons Fred and George, My son Bill, and this is Percy , and this is Charlie, who have all left school, and this is Ginny." All of them had freckles and Red hair, including Ron`s one year younger sister Ginny. All the Weasleys waved. Mr. Weasley continued. " This is Hermione Granger," He waved a hand at Hermione , with brown bushy hair , and she waved at Lila, "Hi!" Mr.Weasley continued "And this is your brother, Harry Potter." Harry went foreword to shake hands with Lila. "Lila, Welcome to #12 Grimmuald place, Headquarters of the Order of the Phoenix."
Chapter 2- Lila And the Order of the Phoenix. " She has your jet black hair and green eyes." Hermione whispered to Harry as Ginny lead Lila to the room she was sharing with Ginny and Hermione. She went of to go with Ginny and Lila. '' Meet you an Harry?s and my room." Ron called quietly after her. Ron and Harry started climbing the stairs to their room. "How could I have a sister?" Harry asked Ron. " I think Dad mentioned something about, in magical blood the cell can keep on growing , even if the mother isn?t alive." Ron answered. They reached their room and found 3 envelopes addressed to Mr. Harry Potter , Bedroom, #12 Grimmuald Place, Ms. Hermione Granger, bedroom, #12 Grimmauld Place, and Mr.Ronald Weasley, bedroom, #12 Grimmauld Place. " Our O.W.l. results! I forgot!" Ron said. "Do you think Hermione remembered?" Harry asked Ron. He had just finished saying that, when the door flew open. " Our O.W.L Results! " Hermione shrieked. Harry handed her her letter. Ron grabbed his. Harry opened his letter. His letter began: Dear Mr. Potter, Your O.W.L.s scores are as followed: Defense Against The Dark Arts: Outstanding Potions: Outstanding Transfiguration: Exceeds Expectations Charms: Exceeds Expectations Herbology: Acceptable Care of Magical Creatures: Exceeds Expectations Divination: Dreadful Astronomy: Poor History of Magic: Dreadful Truly, Minervara McGonagall, Albus Dumbledore, and The Ministry of Magic. Ron, Harry and Hermione were all quiet. Then? "You lot! Supper!" Mrs. Weasley called down. Hermione hurried out of the room, with Ron and Harry at her tail. Lila was just coming down the stairs. "Lila, follow us, and be quiet please" Harry and Ron whispered to her. Lila crept quietly after her brother. Ron went through the kitchen door, as Harry motioned for Lila to follow. He went in after her. Mrs. Weasley came bustling over. "Lila, dear, you can sit down. There?s no need to be quiet in here." Just as Mrs. Weasley said that, there was a screeching from behind the door in the hall. "Tonks" She muttered. Mr. Weasley ran out into the hall, followed by Lupin, letting in the sound. "Blood Traitors! Filthy Mudbloods! Crowding up the home of my Fathers!" Screamed Mrs. Black. Tonks came in, clearly exasperated. "I?m sorry Molly!" Tonks sighed. "It was that stupid Troll?s leg." For there was a troll?s leg umbrella stand in the hall. "It?s all right dear. Sit down and I?ll introduce you to Lila." Mrs. Weasley comforted Tonks. Tonks sat down. "Now. Tonks, this is Harry?s sister Lila Potter. Lila, this is Tonks." Mrs. Weasley said. "Tonks is a metamorphingi. Which means she can change clothes or faces." Tonks said "Your here already? Well, I suppose you would be. Look at this." Tonks scrunched her nose up, concentrating, and all of a sudden instead of the long blond hair she had had a second ago, she had short tomato red hair. Lila blinked. Mr. Weasley and Lupin came in. "Dish us up some soup please Molly." Mr. Weasley said heartily. "Hello there, Lila. I?m Remus Lupin." Lupin introduced himself to Lila. " The former Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher at Hogwarts." Then Ginny asked "Who is the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher anyway?" The adults exchanged uncomfortable glances. Just then, Tonks dropped her soup bowl. Which may have had nothing to do with being clumsy. "Tonks!" Molly Weasley exclaimed, exasperated but clearly relieved. "Sorry" Tonks said in a small voice. Mr. Weasley waved his wand, and the spilled soup was immediately sopped up by some invisible source. " I have some desert in the kitchen when you?re ready, Lila. It?s tripe!" Mrs.Weasley told Lila, excited. "Mrs. Weasley?s tripe is the best, Lila! I highly recommend it!" Lupin said, shooting a teasing glance at Mrs.Weasley. "Enough of that, Remus" Mrs.Weasley said, waving her spoons threateningly. Ginny giggled, while Mr. Weasley and Hermione laughed and Fred, George, Harry, Ron and Lila all stifled full out mirth. Mrs. Weasley served the tripe and Harry slurped it up contentedly. Lila tasted it tentatively, then complimented Mrs. Weasley gratefully, "This is great Mrs.Weasley!" Mrs. Weasley blushed, then asked, did you 3 get any post today?" She asked the trio. Hermione exclaimed "Our O.W.L.S!" With that, Mrs. Weasley sprang to life. "What did you get Ron?" Ron muttered "8 OWLS. Total." "Oh Ron! How wonderful!" Mrs. Weasley celebrated. She was overjoyed at the prospect of young Ronnie being such a good student. Ron sent a desperate glance at the twins, but they just grinned impishly at him and said "Sorry bud, you?re on your on." Next he looked to Mr. Weasley for help, but Arthur was too busy ladling out some more soup for himself. Finally Lupin said "So, you lot, are you looking forward to the next year at Hogwarts?" "Oh yes! I?m in all N.E.W.T. classes!" Hermione said eagerly. "What do you plan to be?" Mr.Weasley asked. "Not sure yet. I like the sea?" Hermione was not sure of her plans, but was thinking on a idea. "You could be very accomplished in the muggle world." Mr. Weasley offered, eager to hear more about the muggle world. "Muggle?" Lila asked, confused. "Non-magic population. Not a drop of wizard blood" said a voice, deep. Dumbledore swept over to Lila, and greeted "Hello Lila. I am Professor Dumbledore, headmaster of Hogwarts, which you shall be going this year. She has her stuff does she?" Dumbledore peered at Lupin. "Er?no, Hagrid?s taking her tomorrow."
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Post by whisper on Sept 8, 2005 1:04:33 GMT
Cool idea...
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Post by nikki6571509 on Sept 10, 2005 1:08:11 GMT
i cant wait till the fourth chapter
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Post by counterklock on Jan 3, 2006 1:08:19 GMT
im gonna start writing my own soon!
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